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wisdomeagleI've been banished to Limbo, home of the virtuous non-believers (don't ask me why). It's peaceful but sad there, much like my life.
Today I was forced to listen to my group tear apart my beautiful short story. No, actually, they gave very decent advice. Apparently it's an ambitious story and a brave one. As I expected, I feminized the narrator, didn't indicate that he was male soon enough, and managed to convince everyone that he was Catholic. *sigh* I wanted to make him Protestant, of course, but there's just not a lot of rich imagery there. So I'll need to revise that, probably, quite heavily. I've got enough material for a novel in there, apparently, and I guess that's my problem-- so. I'll maybe do some of the most important revision, then post it. Yay me.
I don't think I have any serious homework to do tonight!
Today I was forced to listen to my group tear apart my beautiful short story. No, actually, they gave very decent advice. Apparently it's an ambitious story and a brave one. As I expected, I feminized the narrator, didn't indicate that he was male soon enough, and managed to convince everyone that he was Catholic. *sigh* I wanted to make him Protestant, of course, but there's just not a lot of rich imagery there. So I'll need to revise that, probably, quite heavily. I've got enough material for a novel in there, apparently, and I guess that's my problem-- so. I'll maybe do some of the most important revision, then post it. Yay me.
I don't think I have any serious homework to do tonight!