Beautiful. I love this Jessi, older and extrapolated from the material very well, so obsessed with dance, still, and certain if she gives in even a little she'll have to give up everything she's always loved and wanted.
And then there'd be a time commitment and a heart commitment and pretty soon a life commitment, and there'd be no space in my schedule or passion in my soul or room in my life for dance.
This line in particular is perfect and really made my chest ache for Jessi and how she views the world, but also for the people who love her, because she makes life so difficult with her beliefs.
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Date: 2006-05-05 12:03 am (UTC)And then there'd be a time commitment and a heart commitment and pretty soon a life commitment, and there'd be no space in my schedule or passion in my soul or room in my life for dance.
This line in particular is perfect and really made my chest ache for Jessi and how she views the world, but also for the people who love her, because she makes life so difficult with her beliefs.
Thank you for writing this story.