Cordelia/Harmony (esp. h.s.-era) is one of the few Cordelia pairings that interest me. And you make me not hate Harmony (I wouldn't have expected *you* to make me hate her, but since she's borderline between entertaining and annoying in *canon* it's easy for writers to overdo it in fic, so I don't anticipate reading much of this week's round -- unless people have recommendations, of course.)
Your voices are spot-on. I love the line "and asking Harmony to do really disgusting things with her tongue" (that whole sentence, really) because I love the idea of Cordelia knowing that/how she wants someone to go down on her, and of being drunk enough to actually ask someone/a woman/a friend to do that (and of course, love for Harmony to being pussywhipped, pun intended drunk enough to do it).
typo: "the gorgeous stuffed satin purple unicorn sitting on her pillow, who's name isn't Cordy" -- should be "whose" [And the penultimate sentence of the fic should end with a period.]
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Date: 2006-04-11 12:22 am (UTC)Your voices are spot-on. I love the line "and asking Harmony to do really disgusting things with her tongue" (that whole sentence, really) because I love the idea of Cordelia knowing that/how she wants someone to go down on her, and of being drunk enough to actually ask someone/a woman/a friend to do that (and of course, love for Harmony to being
pussywhipped, pun intendeddrunk enough to do it).typo: "the gorgeous stuffed satin purple unicorn sitting on her pillow, who's name isn't Cordy" -- should be "whose" [And the penultimate sentence of the fic should end with a period.]