There is just so much good here I don't even know where to start. This is fabulous, Faith's voice, and Joyce's, and the way they work together, and the way things are awkward but good.
I love Faith dancing, and the way she can forget, and the way she drags Joyce in.
And the ending, oh, the ending, I wanted to single out powerful lines, but each new one is even better than the one before, and they work together so well, the way Joyce can't find her clit, doesn't know how to make her come, but tries so hard and the way Faith remembers and discovers, and the "thank you" and the way it's like a gift and wine and a drum and oh.
This is wonderful. Thank you so much for writing it and sharing it.
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There is just so much good here I don't even know where to start. This is fabulous, Faith's voice, and Joyce's, and the way they work together, and the way things are awkward but good.
I love Faith dancing, and the way she can forget, and the way she drags Joyce in.
And the ending, oh, the ending, I wanted to single out powerful lines, but each new one is even better than the one before, and they work together so well, the way Joyce can't find her clit, doesn't know how to make her come, but tries so hard and the way Faith remembers and discovers, and the "thank you" and the way it's like a gift and wine and a drum and oh.
This is wonderful. Thank you so much for writing it and sharing it.