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Ari (creature of dust, child of God) ([personal profile] wisdomeagle) wrote2005-07-24 12:31 pm

drabble: "Bouvez!" Fred/Kaylee

[100 words and fluffy. R.]

Bouvez!

Kaylee is frothy like lemonade: the inside of her mouth is sugar-sweet, the inside of her sex lemon-bitter. She loves the surface of Kaylee, skimming the sweet cream of her complexion and lapping up her laughter, being tickled by the bubbles of her joy. In the afternoon, they take a break from their repairs and share a cup of water, letting their fingertips just twist on each other's skin, too gentle to be a caress but too intimate for just friends. Life with Kaylee drives numbers and signs right out of Fred's head, quenches thirsts she never knew she had.

[identity profile] marenfic.livejournal.com 2005-07-24 05:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I like very much. Evokes definite gustatory sensations and I can actually see Fred/Kaylee together- what a great pairing.

[identity profile] ladylakira.livejournal.com 2005-07-24 06:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Gustatory - what a great word!

I'm going to steal it, mostly because I agree. Food and Kaylee go so well together and you've blended them together so well.