ext_169839 ([identity profile] evangeline1138.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] wisdomeagle 2005-07-01 02:41 am (UTC)

*feeds you*


Ohhh! Nice job! It's so rare to see these three as part of a threesome in fic.

Like [livejournal.com profile] paian, I love the way you use dream and meditation to bring them together, especially during the final scene.

It's nice that although Teal'c may be formal in address, in his head he now calls them Daniel and Samantha.

But she had all the time in the world and more besides, and despite the stimulation that threatened to overwhelm, she felt curiously calm.

Like coming home. ;-)

In her dreams she knew that Daniel and Teal'c were as different as Lantash was from Martouf, as she was from Jolinar -- as different and as similar.

That comparison was perfect--reconciling Sam's (or Jolinar's) past and present--two lovers in the past, two in the present.

I'd never really thought about each of them being associated more with one of the allies' races before reading this; now it seems so obvious. Thank you for pointing that out via fic!

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