It's so bad, it's in FIRST PERSON. (Which is totally fine if you're an awesome author and can pull it off, but I'm not
a) You are an awesome author, Ari, you really are.
b) I'm about to go write my Remix in first person, because it's not going to work any other way. *sigh* (which "sigh" is for me, not for your writing. And I'm watching Shakespeare in Love which is bad, because CJ may end up sounding Shakespearian...
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Date: 2005-03-11 11:03 am (UTC)a) You are an awesome author, Ari, you really are.
b) I'm about to go write my Remix in first person, because it's not going to work any other way. *sigh* (which "sigh" is for me, not for your writing. And I'm watching Shakespeare in Love which is bad, because CJ may end up sounding Shakespearian...