This is wonderful! I love the poetic quality to it, how it flows. And there are so many great lines! Like this one: "They have no mothers, none of them. They are each other's mothers, all of them."
The thought of them forgetting because of Dawn... wow...
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Date: 2005-02-15 09:42 pm (UTC)The thought of them forgetting because of Dawn... wow...
Yep, love this.