Wow. This is one of those things that I'm going to have to read (and listen to) again and again to get the sense of it properly, which is love. Also love is your reading: Moses had a river once and Jesus had a river too and though they are not shepherds they still know these things of rivers - amazing rhythm, just sticks in my head and resonates. The flow, the repition, the speed and the words melting into each other is perfect for River and actually rather wonderful (and haunting) for Kaylee. So yes, wow.

Poetic prose is bloody great, am I right?! ;)

And, I believe I've said this before, but yay Voiceposts!! ;)